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JOMD: Remix and Retort

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Please god, let me stay,                                            
just one more day,                                                         
if you were to take me away,                                           
her life would surely decay...


if i were you,                                                                   
i'd kill me too.                                                                 
just let me slip away,                                                       
from this hoarse body of decay.                                        

to rest my body, so tattered by stones,
full of broken promises, and shattered bones!!</b>

please god,            
please...
jus...
just one more day...
                 

a love of life lost on the side...                                
reality warped by polictical riptide..                       
so soft is the silk that lines me mind,
the safest place i know i can't hide...

dead from the get go, you shouldn't of let go,
filling you up with life, and all that you shouldn't know!!
took me down and ripped me apart,
bore to the center of my overly callous heart!!

just let me stay,
atleast one more day,
it can't end this way
no...
not this way....


as you cry over my broken soul,                    (where is your god now?)
your tear drops of heaven, let me go               
diing in your arms...
i paint the snow...
...
..
.

"only wanting one nights peaceful rest....
watching the morning waves beautiful crest....
believing life couldn't mean less....
looking to the stars. taking my last breathe....





"erased, over, out....."
Just one more day: Remixed... one of my older deviations...

i have no lyrical ability...

it's not good...

someone help me...



bold italic: progressive whipers into yelling
italic: harmonic, quiet
underlined: said under breathe
bold: yelling
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Smozie02's avatar
its a really great peom.....it touched me....im gonna fav it if you dont mind....